Monday, December 10, 2007

Poetry prompt - Annoying Advice

Thanks to Patois for the latest poetry prompt from Kane. I don't write limericks as a rule but this took the time very pleasantly. And here is mine, constructed out of annoying advice.

Just relax the midwife told me.
Stop running away from that bee.
There's no use repining,
look for silver linings.
There's plenty more fish in the sea.

5 comments:

Mad Kane said...

Thanks for joining in on my prompt. Midwife-advice -- what a fun topic!
Mad Kane

Andy Sewina said...

I think you just about hit the nail on the head there! You seem to have got it just right.

Anonymous said...

I really enjoyed this...thanks for stopping by so that I could come here and read your take on the prompt, really lovely. 'no use running from that bee' had me smiling...thank you.
UL

Patois42 said...

Yay! That is great. Perhaps you should start limerick writing as a rule.

Sian said...

Thanks for the comments guys :)