Saturday, March 15, 2008

Sunday Scribblings - Bedtime Story

There was once a giant's daughter.
Her hair was spun candlelight,
Her voice was soft rainfall.
The giant feared her loss
and bound her to him
with chains made from the roots of mountains.
She did not weep
neither did she curse him.
She thought for a while.
She made her a gown from the tissue of mist
She snipped a girdle from the Northern Lights
She bound the North Star to her brow,
took hold of her chains
made from roots of mountains
and died.
The giant found her thus.
We turn away from his grief
which was like a black wave.
He endured, though much about him was destroyed.
Time passed...
But the Giant's daughter
who had clung with the grip of winter to her chains
made from roots of mountains
climbed hand over hand across the chasm
back to the home that waited for her.
The chains, swung and rattled as she climbed
but they did not fail her.
Like the kiss of sunrise
on the face of a cloud
so life returned to her shell.
She stretched, she smiled.
She turned to her father
and looked at the chains he had made her.
Her warm breath
crumbled them to dust.

13 comments:

Anonymous said...

told you before you need to wright that book.you have so much scope in your wrighting's,put it all together girl.don't hide it with snippet's, all those who comment to your blog have said they like your work, go for it Mrs V.

Paul said...

When I look at each word (the trees), there's not one out of place. When I look at the whole (the wood), it's wonderful. This is really special.

Pippa said...

Lovely.

Anonymous said...

Brava! More! That's enchanting, indeed.

paisley said...

what an absolutely mystifying bedtime story... i know i would be up long after its telling still sorting it out... wonderful piece.....

Robin said...

Truly enchanting.

Linda Jacobs said...

Your descriptions are light as gossamer and just beautiful!

Technodoll said...

I am trying to make sense of this lovely story but the fumes of wine keep getting in the way. Dangit.

So was the dad a bad parent or not?!

*confused*

Anonymous said...

I love fairy tales! More so told in poetry!

Yours is so ggod!

The books I would write

Tumblewords: said...

Superb story! Exquisite wording!

Patois42 said...

Gosh, Sian, this is marvelous. It's so compelling. Well done.

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UL said...

oh i am a sucker for fairy tales and this is one i shall remember for a long long time, thanks Sian.