An appropriate prompt for the new haiku site - One Single Impression
Generally, I find change uncomfortable, even when it is desperately needed and I fight hard against it even though I know that sometimes it is for the best. So this is mine.
Generally, I find change uncomfortable, even when it is desperately needed and I fight hard against it even though I know that sometimes it is for the best. So this is mine.
Change
So hard to grasp,
like sand through fingers,
like water, like flame.
Thank you to Sandy and Andree for stepping forward and accepting change even while keeping some things the same. Well done you guys
12 comments:
fire earth and water
ouch
I would hate to grasp a flame
great response to the prompt.
A feeling shared by many.
Well expressed.
your similes are perfect! glad to see you back
Oh, yes. This is surely a vivid description and one that resonates with me!
This strikes home with me, too. Hate change. I would keep the world from changing if I could, let alone myself. It's wonderfully expressive.
My change is here. Thank you.
I can relate to this one very well
Something we all can identify with; thank you.
spoken well, ku is awesome...
Sian, this is superb. All the elements right there for us.
Wonderful expression of the ungraspable nature of change
This is really good. I am so glad to have visited you today.
So true … and yet change is the only ‘constant’ in life it seems. Well done!
Hugs and blessings,
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