For Barbara, my MIL - enough said I think.
Oil and water - we
find our common ground through the
sunrise in his smile
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Tuesday, May 29, 2007
One Deep Breath - Common Ground
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6 comments:
Lovely words!
Hi Sian! This is terrific and very creative. I love the images of oil and water and the sunrise in his smile. So beautiful how very different people can find shared joy.
What on earth is a MIL-Man I love? seems to fit. Awesome poem. I was blown away. The simple way you describe it with a smile is great.
Thanks everyone for your kind words. Chris, a MIL is a mother in law :)
Hehehe I found this delightful and loving.
Lovely haiku. It took me a while, but I got it!
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