Dante and Beatrice
walking the tightest of ropes,
Sheol or Heaven?
Had a terrible job writing this prompt, just couldn't get it. This will have to do
For better efforts check out ODB here
Wednesday, July 04, 2007
Light and Shadow for ODB
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2 comments:
Hi Sian! I like this haiku a lot. The contrasts in it are terrific -- the abode of the dead vs. heaven is very powerful! And the names Dante and Beatrice sound pretty together.
:)
Thank you Clare, I just wanted a bit more oomph in it and couldn't get what I wanted. But I didn't want to pass the prompt up 'cos it was such a cool idea.
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